1.0. Essays
1.1. Self-introduction essay
- link
- nnn words
- 2007.mm.dd
- link
- words
- 2007..
- link
- words
- 2007.
- link
- words
- 2007.
It was a little short, but had lots of variety.
2.0. Comments
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog:
- Title of post with link: Cherry blossoms @ Ichifusa Reservoir
- Date of post: 2007.03.31
- Date of your first comment: 2007.07.02
- Number of words in your first comment: 13 words
- Do you believe that was a good comment? Why or why not?
- I think it is poor coment,because it use a few words.
- Title of post with link: The highest score
- Date of post: 2007.6.1
- Date of best comment: 2007.7.2
- Number of words in best comment: 16 words
- Why do you believe that is a good comment?
- Because I like Bowling.This sentence tell me that he likes bowling very much!
- ume tree
- 40 words
- 2007.05.21
- Why do you believe that is a good comment?
- This comenter is very kind,I am very glad!
2.4.1. The greatest number of comments on any of your essays
- Title of your essay with link: Title+link
- Date of essay: 2007.mm.dd
- The total number of comments on that essay: n comments
- Best comment on that essay by a classmate: BloggerID
- Date of best comment on that essay: 2007.mm.dd
- When did you respond to those comments? 2007.mm.dd
- What did you do in response to those comments?
- ...
- Title of your post with link: Ume tree
- Date of post: 2007.5.18
- The total number of comments on that post: 1 comments
- Best comment on that post by a classmate (Blogger ID): triphaina
- Date of best comment on that post: 2007.5.21
- When did you respond to those comments? 2007.7.3
- What did you do in response to those comments?
- I appreciate her comment, and I send gratitude mail.
- ...
3.0. Typing speed trials
3.1. Worst speed
- 23words
- 2007.04.18
- 52words
- 2007.05.23
- average 36.5words
- number of trials4
4.1. Book review 1-01
- David Beckam
- nnn words
- 2007.7.2
- HOLLY WOOD
- nnn words
- 2007.7.2
- TINKERS FARM
- nnn words
- 2007.7.2
- BLUE MOON VALLEY
- nnn words
- 2007.7.2
- BETWEEN TWO WORLDS
- nnn words
- 2007.7.2
- Title of post with link
- nnn words
- 2007.mm.dd
5.0. Visual presentation
5.1. Archive at top of sidebar (Yes/No):
5.1.1. Displaying titles of posts:yes
5.1.2. Organized by month (or week):yes
5.2. Labels displayed in sidebar (Yes/No):
5.1.1. Including: books, essays & quickposts:yes
5.1.2. Including other labels that you've attached to more than one post:yes
- List of other labels that you've used:Others,Proto-portfolio,Typing test
5.3. Links & media
5.3.1. Pictures
- Does your blog profile include a picture?no
- How many of your blog posts include pi0ctures?6
- How many of your posts include three or more links?
- How many of your blog posts include other media?
- Which other media have you used?
1 件のコメント:
Hi Takeshi,
You've listed only one of four essays already due in section 1 of your proto-portfolio. The fifth essay: a CD, movie, restaurant or website review (175+ words); is due Mon., July 2.
You've composed only one of five major items in section 2 (Comments). Completion of this section depends upon timely comments that you make on peers' essays, and get in return from your peers on your essays and blog posts.
You cannot get comments on your essays if your classmates cannot find your essays. They won't find essays that aren't there, and may not find your essays if you haven't labeled them "essays" and displayed the labels that you're using in the blog sidebar.
Section 3 on typing speed trials needs an update. Your best speed is now better than 52 words typed in five minutes, isn't it?
Though the template I prepared for section 4 went only as far as Book review 1-06, this section of your proto-portfolio should be approaching completion with listings for 10 or 11 of 12 book reviews (minimum) due this semester. You've listed none.
The answer for section 5.2. needs to be a "yes," and you should correct the numbers on the following sub-sections. 5.2.1. also needs a "yes." The evidence will appear in your sidebar as soon as you add and display the labels required for book reviews (books), essays (essays) & quick posts (quickposts).
Your response to item 5.3.2. will be one (or more) as soon as you add the necessary links to your proto-portfolio.
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